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no wips on front

I would rather see an actual submission without intro than this. The dump and the forum would be a more suitable place for testing material.

evilblackcat13 responds:

yeah.. sorry for this....i'm still learning....and also.. i'm not up to this... those forum.... i feel like i gonna get shit and stuff...

It's Krinkels design.

Why do people keep posting stuff that uses other people's design but they don't declare it as such? This makes a submission look like stolen content, intended or not. Guys, if I see stuff like that then I have no choice but to give a bad rating, even if the actual movie is kinda nicely done liek in this case...

Rapheus responds:

Uhhh... I credit Krinkels in the credits, champ. How is that not crediting the design?

denied

Wow, that is one useless movie. Not only you mistake the ridiculously long "intro" for the actual content, no, the content itself is a loveless crap loop where weird guys yell a stupid song into your ear which loops itself afterwards. I don't need stuff like this.

granny is amused

Cute story, great visual style, nice music. It's a round thing, your work should get a good rating. Good luck.

Ayai responds:

credit to Pushbar for the music. thanks a lot Nuckel!

Yip-yip-yip-yip... Uh-huh. Uh-huh (Who gets it?)

Make it a looping GIF and it is fine. For a Flash submission on NG this is too weak.

Oh, uh, wa, ah ah ah!

Your ECG wave looks odd. Ever seen a real one? The visuals are okay in parts but lot of the scenes have not enough details. You should try keeping the shadings constantly available. Also for long still scenes you might want to use a 2-frame jerky motion graphic to enhance the illusion of cartoon motion.

Also I think I have never seen a more obvious easter egg. :P

MadVTaco responds:

I just wanted to make the ECG wave, match the beat. Did you notice it did that?

It's gay. (See what I did thar?)

I'm not a fan of yaoi content and I would be warned before that stuff shows up on my screen. Technically the movie is okay. Could use an stop_event to avoid the loop. Also the line thickness seems a bit thin in some places.

Ugh

Wow, MS Paint now exports flash movies? Seriously you need to work on everything here and raise it a level or two. This feels like an animated story board drawn with the non-dominant hand using the mouse.
Though the setting and script tell me that you got some interesting ideas you should share with the community. Would be a shame if those wouldnt get a nicer look.

Eye on you

There is A LOT room for improvements. But first, why don't you use your own characters? You dont even declare you use characters created by Krinkels or choose a title that gives a hint that it's kinda of a parody. This is what stolen content looks like. You might want to think about it while on the other hand you study some way more tutorials and learn how to avoid auto loops and how to animate properly... Way to go.

MassKilling responds:

ok we are %u0446e will use your character but we could not think what we need at this time we do iy nano models until the soldiers that we will use the model Krinkels big thanks to him because without him we would not be able to make this video

Ka-Boom!

Visuals and story are okay but you should put some more effort into the voice acting and maybe think about contacting some of the many friendly collaborating users here on NG to assist you with fresh voices if there are several roles to play.

RapistSanta responds:

I'll look into it next time! :)

Well, hello there. I usually contribute to NG by reviewing your games and videos but if your are searching for another collaborator or some help in graphics stuff outside of flash then feel free to drop me a line!

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