Nuckel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Working On New Year]

muito loka indeed

It is not a flash, it is not voiced in English, its audio is bad and the story doesn't make any sense to new people. There are quite a few things that make me wonder if you really expect people to visit your site after seeing this submission on NG. It could have easily been localized into an international format with kinda proper audio and stuff but if you don't want to go the hard way then deal with bad ratings.

FamiliaMuitoLoKa responds:

Yes this is a flash! I just use another pogram do edit the animations. and then, put back to flash!

[Today's Youth Seduction]

dramedy

It's quite good but I cannot really see if it wants to be a comedy or a drama as it got elements from both. Also if it was shorter and more concentrated on the punchlines and visual jokes then it would make a great comedy short.

[Birds & the Bee (loop)]

bee gone, bird

I dont see the use in watching a movie that looks like a simple game. Also I don't think I would agree with this opposite idea between birds and bees. But fact is I think this submission is rather poor and not a joy to watch. If it would have been an actual game (with some more content) I might would have another oppinion on it but this thing here is not pleasing me.

mrnihil responds:

You don't agree with the birds and the bees being opposites... You probably need to have a talk with your parents, then. Next time, I'll try really hard to make something as cool as Vandal. I know it'll be difficult, but I'll try.

[Lullaby - No Time to Rest]

way to run, uh, go

You should edit the title to tell people its only a WIP or animation loop. Also this demo stuff generally belongs into the dump and the forums.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump
Despite that it might look promising but you should take a look at humans running, there's a distinctive jump phase in which no leg touches the ground. This here looks like speed walking with headwind. I like the fact you at least put a bit of audio in there.

littlekittysilver responds:

Dude. For starters, I'm not really use to the tablet and telling someone that their hard work belongs in the dump form is really effencive to young artist who are still starting out, I only been animating for the pass 5 months now and in my animation class that I passed with a 94% and 100% on every animation assignment thrown at me as well as I was the best animator there. Let along as I mention in the artist comment, I'm not use to using a tablet.

Secondly, I know how humans run because I spent most my childhood running like hell trying to get away with the people trying to kill me.

Third, this isn't a demo, trust me. I only posted my best work so far on New Grounds when on DeviantArt I'll post anything I think is actually good to be seen.

[psychedelic anti-drug PSA]

There's art in fart

You try to educate people to create stuff like this? Please stop it.

[Pokemon Robo Version]

my eyes, my ears, my goodness...

Well, if you are not able to come up with something better than this using TGF2 then you should switch to Flash or an equaly powerful application... I dont use MS Paint for image manipulation either. Though I do have the feeling that it is the lack of ideas that is responsible for this outcome and that a better program wouldn't have helped much.

[The Evolution of Music]

toodeloo

Well, I can see you put some effort in there but the music, or more specific, the tonal harmonies are not working most of the time. Though you should get a rating above blam. :3

[2 Friends Play Minecraft]

you got wood

Yup, yup, all good. Though one thing that probably no or few people pointed out yet is the buggy outtakes wherein the audio is looping after its end.
Rest is fair and square.

Jimbo-Limbo responds:

Yo,

Cheers for looking into the special features. Just checked through them again myself and didn't notice anything out of the ordinary. If you get a second, could you message me when and where about it happens? That'd be sweet.

Cheers for the review, MATE!

[Meian no Bufu Opening]

powered by Naruto

This is one of the many bits of content in the web that I consider being a mangaed to death. Seriously people should first try to develope a feel for their drawings and works and not just blindly rely on copying average manga and anime optics. This is merely another form of AMV and those I personally don't call art.

KappaYoshi315 responds:

In all honesty, it was powered by Bleach. Get your anime right XD
An AMV is mixing non-original work together.
This is the video for the opening credits of my anime. I mean, I could not put music in it, but that wouldn't make much sense would it. Also, the main characters are 100% original. Thanks for your opinion though.

[The Checkup]

Okay but

The joke doesn't get conveyed really good. You would need to add one or two more numbers being counted down (in the background) as in the original joke telling version. Also the intro could be a bit shorter as it is accompanying a really short scene. Visuals are okay but there's plenty of room for improvements.

JonnyDREDD responds:

Yea I know what you mean about the intro. I did experiment by completely removing it but without it the flash is just too short.
I will make sure I revise it though :P
and with the visuals, believe it or not they have come a long way already, but Im still working on it, and there will most definitely be a huge improvement over my next few submissions.
Thanks for the review :)