dramedy
It's quite good but I cannot really see if it wants to be a comedy or a drama as it got elements from both. Also if it was shorter and more concentrated on the punchlines and visual jokes then it would make a great comedy short.
dramedy
It's quite good but I cannot really see if it wants to be a comedy or a drama as it got elements from both. Also if it was shorter and more concentrated on the punchlines and visual jokes then it would make a great comedy short.
way to run, uh, go
You should edit the title to tell people its only a WIP or animation loop. Also this demo stuff generally belongs into the dump and the forums.
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump
Despite that it might look promising but you should take a look at humans running, there's a distinctive jump phase in which no leg touches the ground. This here looks like speed walking with headwind. I like the fact you at least put a bit of audio in there.
Dude. For starters, I'm not really use to the tablet and telling someone that their hard work belongs in the dump form is really effencive to young artist who are still starting out, I only been animating for the pass 5 months now and in my animation class that I passed with a 94% and 100% on every animation assignment thrown at me as well as I was the best animator there. Let along as I mention in the artist comment, I'm not use to using a tablet.
Secondly, I know how humans run because I spent most my childhood running like hell trying to get away with the people trying to kill me.
Third, this isn't a demo, trust me. I only posted my best work so far on New Grounds when on DeviantArt I'll post anything I think is actually good to be seen.
There's art in fart
You try to educate people to create stuff like this? Please stop it.
my eyes, my ears, my goodness...
Well, if you are not able to come up with something better than this using TGF2 then you should switch to Flash or an equaly powerful application... I dont use MS Paint for image manipulation either. Though I do have the feeling that it is the lack of ideas that is responsible for this outcome and that a better program wouldn't have helped much.
you got wood
Yup, yup, all good. Though one thing that probably no or few people pointed out yet is the buggy outtakes wherein the audio is looping after its end.
Rest is fair and square.
Yo,
Cheers for looking into the special features. Just checked through them again myself and didn't notice anything out of the ordinary. If you get a second, could you message me when and where about it happens? That'd be sweet.
Cheers for the review, MATE!
powered by Naruto
This is one of the many bits of content in the web that I consider being a mangaed to death. Seriously people should first try to develope a feel for their drawings and works and not just blindly rely on copying average manga and anime optics. This is merely another form of AMV and those I personally don't call art.
In all honesty, it was powered by Bleach. Get your anime right XD
An AMV is mixing non-original work together.
This is the video for the opening credits of my anime. I mean, I could not put music in it, but that wouldn't make much sense would it. Also, the main characters are 100% original. Thanks for your opinion though.
Okay but
The joke doesn't get conveyed really good. You would need to add one or two more numbers being counted down (in the background) as in the original joke telling version. Also the intro could be a bit shorter as it is accompanying a really short scene. Visuals are okay but there's plenty of room for improvements.
Yea I know what you mean about the intro. I did experiment by completely removing it but without it the flash is just too short.
I will make sure I revise it though :P
and with the visuals, believe it or not they have come a long way already, but Im still working on it, and there will most definitely be a huge improvement over my next few submissions.
Thanks for the review :)
Well, hello there. I usually contribute to NG by reviewing your games and videos but if your are searching for another collaborator or some help in graphics stuff outside of flash then feel free to drop me a line!
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